New VFX Artist Here-- Would Love Critique

Hi everyone! I just started delving into VFX around a week or two ago and am looking to further my projects by beginning to ask for critique from others. I started putting this effect together and feel as though I have a good base, but am unsure of what I can add to truly make it shine. Any advice, tips, or critique is greatly appreciated :slight_smile:

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(Sorry if this isnt the right place to put this post!)

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