Feedback on portfolio piece

Currently working on my first portfolio piece. All feedback is welcome! Thanks in advance!



This looks great. Only feedback I have is transition the liquid in bowl from bottom to top. As it moves down the tube perhaps you could play with the timing so it’s less linear. The camera shake is nice, could the liquid in the bowl rock back and forth with it? At the end you have sparks coming out, maybe that could be drips of liquid?

Thanks for your feedback! Will look into those things and see if I can improve them. Making the liquid rock back and forth more with the shakes is a nice idea.