Dabo: Sketch #5

Final version:

WIPs below:

Hello,

I’m working on another sequence for this sketch which will cover the following stages: idle, beam charge, fire, and target destroy. Apart from the beam visuals, here are some goals:

  • Basic user control of the sequence stage (idle -> charge -> fire)
  • Beam length controllable with scene node (not by user)
  • Melt effect on target (maybe in the style of lightsaber through a bulkhead?)
  • Looping camera cuts, based on stage

Here’s the ref board + first concept for my version of this sketch:

Here is what I’ve set up in Unity:

I started diverging from my concept pretty early on, but that speaks more to my novice painting skills. I will be redoing the paintover with updated elements, so I can workout the “destroy” stage. I’d also like to storyboard some of the shots, per stage.

The effect isn’t sequenced yet, so everything is going off at once. There will be distinct “intake” phase for the cannon, which should reduce the noise a bit. I’ll be sequencing the shot with Timeline as the effect develops!

Here are rough stages of the cannon (I just toggled the effect in the editor. It will be less janky once properly sequenced):
05_pulseCannon_01_anim

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Its got a good foundation. The point of impact and point of firing is the places I’d add a little something more.
Impact point has a green glow in the video, if you want green then that color has to be more integrated in the other elements, if its more like the thumbnail gifs with no green then I’d make a mini version of the whole splash effect that comes off an a sharper angle. Or maybe something like the Konstantini Di example.
Firing point I’d say just something to help it be less of a clean exit. Even a glow or something to break up the point a bit.

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Here’s the latest pass:

It contains more work to the effect, along with a sequencing pass.

Thank you for the feedback, @DavidSchoneveld ! I added a stretched flare to the exit and a more pronounced flare at the point of impact. They kind of feel like overlays with how I authored them, so I will try your suggestion of some more mesh styled shapes.

The green was an early attempt to mix in a different hue, but I am having trouble making it look intentional, so I swapped back to a more monochrome effect. I’ve noticed that I have a tendency towards additive overlays, and I wash things out quickly!

I also got some feedback about it looking like a pokeball :stuck_out_tongue:, so I removed the round feature at the front. I reverted to a grey ball for the cannon as well, as the black/shiny mat was distracting.

I should be able to get a few more evenings this month to work on it, and I will keep posting as I go. I will try to get a better recording next time as well… My OBS settings seem to be lacking.

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Didn’t get another chance in July, but I’m still picking away at this.

Latest capture:

Changelist:

  • Added some mesh flares to muzzle and impact point
  • Material tweaks to beam & impact flare to give more shape detail.
  • Sequence stretched out to give more time for effect
  • Pushed colours a bit more towards red

A couple more goals:

  • “Intake” phase is looking rough. I’d like to clean up the emissive texture on the model and better anchor the steam effect to it, as well as to the glowy motes
  • Continue to lean towards some deeper reds
  • Melty effect on the target.

I’m going to consider the following original goals as “out of scope”, and focus on the effect instead :slight_smile: :

  • User controlled firing stages
  • Looping camera cuts for those stages

Feedback is always welcome. Also… if anyone can explain how to get rid of banding on vignettes in URP, I will be much obliged.

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Update with tonight’s work:

  • Intake phase polish, added an extra bone to cut down on the steam wobble
  • More dark colour tweaks (mostly reds)
  • Focal point flare added to the beam start position
  • Melty effect added to target
  • A bunch of little timing fixes

I think I’m close to calling this one, but let me know if anything jumps out as fixable!
I will probably take a fresh look at the melt in a day or two, since it’s technically first pass.

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Alright, I think I’m going to call this one done! :

  • Added more detail to the melt, and softened its material transition
  • Brightened up the firing point of the beam, and animated the impact point to move along with the melt
  • Cleaned up animation states on attacker ( There was a weird blend between charging and firing)
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