Hey everyone, I decided to start this sketchbook for feedbacks and to keep things organized and stay motivated. I’ll try to upload regularly. Feel free to give advice & feedbacks!
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Phoenix Dive
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It maybe just only me but the sphere shapes make me feel that that the spell will deal some damage?
Maybe make it less apparent or removing it will help to bring focus on the healing aspect of the spell, depending of what your goal is with it.
On the color side I feel like a simple gradient with a different green hue on bigger elements and a bit of hue randomness on the smaller particles would help to make the effects looks less flat.
I like the timing, really something I wish to get better at 
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What I had in mind was creating a healing dome. Since its shape is round and I used the color green, I thought it wouldn’t give the idea of damaging the player. However, you might be right. I’m pretty much done with this effect, but I’ll take your words into account for the next effect. Thanks!
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Might be the due to the sharpness of the sphere on top of the saturated color? 
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A link to YouTube would be better instead of ArtStation or X.
Upd. Still not comfortable. What a reason for all those links? I meant just put a video link to click&play.
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In case someone wants to follow my work on different platforms, is it forbidden?
No, it’s not comfortable to wait 4 seconds after clicking the link when it can be done just like this:
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Oh, I get it now. Thank you I changed it.
This is best one. As good as Black Desert 
Upd. I watched till the end. And only first slash effect was interesting. I watched it 10 times. But the last one is boring. Huge spells should be more interesting.
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