Lost in the Void Cinematic

Hey again, after a couple of long nights, I finally finished the sequence. However, I need to improve it a little more. Someone suggested having moonlight through the leaves during the first couple of shots to give a counter light to the warm candle light. Additionally, someone noticed some of the animation isn’t fluid and pops a bit during the walking animation.

Plus some camera shots need more development.


I am looking for any critiques and comments,to help get this to a professional standard.
Any feedback on the colour/style and overall atmosphere are also sought.