Hi Rythmico !
the laser part seems to be the best part, the impact and build up need some work in my opinion,
i would suggest you to look up to some reference (like this one : https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=10&v=nRKcKp0ZUx4) it’s always easier to copy than create when you begin to learn something (but don’t just copy be creative and take only what you like!).
I think the first 3 circles need some timing work, to make it less linear you can make use of curves (in the “size over lifetime module”) and make it so that the circle are never static even if it means moving just a little, also they collapse way too fast, (you can find timing information here : https://nexus.leagueoflegends.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/VFX_Styleguide_final_public_hidpjqwx7lqyx0pjj3ss.pdf)
The impact on the wall is a bit off when compared to the other elements in your effect, the glow balls should be affected by gravity and should move very fast and slow down (you will find a gravity variable at the top of shuriken UI, and you will find a module called “limit speed over lifetime” play with these variables, like “dampen” and “speed”, and don’t forget to increase the initial speed by, a lot !)