Wow, that is some amazing feedback. Thank you for all the comments! I'm happy that you've been nit picky as well because it'll help boost the project in the end. Even the small and intricate details can be improved upon so thanks again.
Looking at the feedback you have posted, I know about the motion blur and the text, I took it off the text so that you could read it a bit better - this was also feedback from a fellow student that mentioned about removing the motion blur but I'll have another look at it and try and make it work with some form of blurring so it blends with the rest of the image better.
I'll take another look at the tracking on the Aston Martin because I haven't noticed any bad tracking on that one, I know about the Flare advert though - I'll go over the tracking data for it and fix it. I know what you mean as far as the colours go on the video. If I can replace it with something more fitting colour-wise, I probably will.
I love the idea of a blue screen of death for humour and may add that in as an optional extra now that I think about it but for the purpose of the assignment, I think I may just keep it as an optional extra... I'll see about it.
At 0:07 seconds, if you're referring to the wallpaper, I'm glad you noticed that because I didn't. I've just noticed it and will have to fix that.
For the info board at 10 seconds, it does actually have some blurring on as well as a greyscale animated background that all comes together to make the sign work. I'll look into adding some more blur to see if it works better or not.
You make an interesting point about the War Rig design. It's given me an idea to try out to see if it looks any better. I agree though, it's definitely something I can see being available come that time.
I like the idea of adding QR markers on each edge. The text is supposed to be in a small amount of 3d space and I have pushed it back a few times due to feedback from many people seeing it coming off the page here and there because of the angle of the camera. I do also love the idea of the language changing whilst viewing it.
At 30 seconds, I think I see what you're talking about but it's definitely not deeper than the wall. I have created several nulls within the scene so I can see where different points are in 3d space. In this case, the monitors to the wall and using the Top view in After Effects, I've moving the layers relative to the objects in the scene so the monitor effects are where the monitors are at in the scene and the wallpaper effects are where the wallpaper is in the scene. As far as the emoji goes, fair enough on personal opinion. It is part of the video in the wallpaper so there's nothing I can do about it beyond changing the clip, which I am not likely to do to be honest.
Hmm... Thinking about the Jpeg, I could make up a new image file extension name considering it is the future. Potentially, new extensions could take over in the future.
For the rest of the feedback, looking at the digital displays and the RGB pattern idea, I will definitely give this a shot because the keyboard especially needs fixing. It looks right to me but I want something more to it to help sell that it's a touch sensitive keyboard glowing on the table and the RGB pattern sounds like a promising idea.
Thanks again for your feedback. I'll go over my work and see what kind of improvements I can make to it based off of the information you've suggested.