Hi All,
This is my first major set piece based on a character animation. Would love some critique and feedback on it from you awesome peoples.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEfrV34_gE8&feature=youtu.be
Credit to @Jordanov for his write up on vertex crushing and the referral to the deepspacebanana write up.
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Love the idea! Maybe something diffrent for the ending - more baaam! 
Yeah a couple of people said the same on the discord, so I am gonna sort something else for it 
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You have trails on the way up, I think it needs trails on the way down or some extra flare or a shockwave. Maybe a few more frames in the animation in anticipation of the downward attack or a little “charge up” effect. Looks great!
what also may help is to highlight the character as he teleports up, it’s a bit hard catch up with my eyes if he blends in with the background to try and find him after he teleports.