Hey! My long overdue update to my entry.
I decided to do timing and general idea first before going into textures and small artistic tweaks. This is what I came up with at first:
My Mentor - Piotr Suchodolski, gave me feedback about it, he said that it’s too linear, no buildups and releases. So I tweeked it and came up with this:
What do you guys think? Any feedback is greatly appreciated