hi, I hoping if someone could give me C%C on this portal VFX i made, this is my initial pass.
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Looks pretty nice!
Couple of things I might want to revise are:
- The smoke feels odd and out of place. Not sure if there’s a need for it
- The panning vertical lines from the center to the outside are a bit to strong perhaps and perhaps interfer with the effect of the ball touching the surface. I would lower the opacity
- The whirlpool type effect could be emphasised a bit more, since it’s not too visible on the black background.
Anyway, these are my points, so feel free to try them and see how it looks
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thx you so much, any feedback is good,