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I think the water looks a bit to static moving in and on the top after moving in. Maybe make it bounce a bit and use an ease while moving in? I think if you add some small clouds or particles on top of the fountain you can hide its static-ness 
. The clouds look cool 
I think a cute feel would be supported by more rounded shapes (the spiky floor texture is not supporting the rest of your vfx I feel)
Using more poppy timing and using a lot more saturated and bright colors would improve the effect a ton I think.
The black backgroun, checkerboard floor and the overall dark lighting your carrot model has isn’t hitting the right tone.
(I know these aren’t exactly part of your VFX but context/environment is important and I think a midtone gray would be a lot more neutral)
But I love the randomness of the idea and your focal point, the carrot is amazing, I can imagine it being summoned by a cult of really cute bunnies ^^