Aran's Sketchbook - Feedback needed

I have this thunder-strike I am working on. My first real attempt at working on a Visual effect and I can’t seem to pinpoint where I am really going wrong, but something with the timing feels off. Would really appreciate any feedback you can give.
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Took a break from working on this thunder strike.

I made a Sci fi sphere shield. I wanted to focus on making some interactive shaders / effects.

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Been working on a Snow scene with a teleporter. Looking for any feedback. Video found here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/AZwY95

Heres a GIF:
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