AOE simple Effect

I made an update to my AOE Effect and I used things I learned with VFXA I would like to make a change and I welcome for ideas and feedback
here it is https://youtu.be/JZTRq97MAmw

hello,

could you explain more your thoughts on what you are trying to make?

From the techincal side, I could see some room for improvments.

1:This center cylinder could use a fresnel shader or adjustment to the alphas to have this faded edge.

2: I’m not sure what the two larger “corkscrew” peice are doing, but they could use some help “fading out”, as right now they “pop” away.